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 For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)

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PostSubject: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Thu Dec 15, 2011 5:53 am

The sun sat behind the clouds, turning the sky a ghostly chrimson as it dappled the forset floor on which a single creature walked. The animal moved as if part of the woods with a set course under paw. This animal's mind bubbled with confusion, excitement as it's speed slowly increased until it's pace turned into a run. The trees became nothing but a blur as the wolf ran faster and faster until it's paws landed into a small grassy clearing it stopped dead in it's tracks, as if frozen. With his nose twitching slightly everything changed. The air was heavy and swirling with the scent of something.... something of illness that he hadn't ever encountered before. It clouded the world in a deadly scilence, shook the earth under his paws with an unknown power and shaped the world into something unrecognizable. One of his paws slowly slid forward until he moved the rest into a uncontrolled trot slowly nearing a small willow grove. Willow branches brushed by his pelt while the stench grew more. He stopped infront of the last blanket of gnarled branches. A devilish red light loomed on the other side as did the source of the illness. Carefully, the wolf pushed a side the branches while squinting into the red light. What he saw made him wail...
" The rest of horrid information willnot be told, for now. My name is "Storm of the red fangs"now just "Storm". This is a story, not a fairy tail with a damsel in distress or good verses evil with good always wining, no, this is my story. The story of detirmation, brutness, betrayal, murder, a prophecy from an elder and an unfinished saying "For as long as the wind blows we will always be.." Yet like all good stories, there must be a beginning and for this one it starts at my first day of training."

To be continued....
Dun Dun Dun!!!
Ps sorry for the typos, blame my IPod! XD
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Thu Dec 15, 2011 7:57 am

I like! -waits for more-
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:31 pm

I like it, it's all like, cool and mistory (spelled mistory wrong, lol)
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:29 am

Why thank you XD
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:16 am

Very Nice Storm. ^^


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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Wed Dec 28, 2011 9:02 pm

Srry for being impatient but, when r u going to continue the story? We've all been waiting for a litttle while for it to continue....
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Wed Dec 28, 2011 10:32 pm

Don't you worry Ghuna, it'll be out any day now!
Edit: never mind, here it is XD

Chapter 1:
Training day


A warm summer's light filtered through the dens opening, signifying a new day has just begun. Storm of fangs felt a light nudge on his side as a soft yet stern voice rang in his ears, "son, the sun is rising. It's time to wake up." Storm flopped onto his other side and mumbled angrily "but I don't wana." The nudge turned into a push as storm's father lowered his mouth to his ear and growled softly "Oh really now? So you want to miss your first day of training?" 'Training?!' on que Storm of fangs leaped to his, now wide awake 'how could I have forgotten?' In the Fallen Stars pack the first day of Training was over all the most important and besides, This would be the first time Storm would get to leave the den and meet all the other pups! "me?! Miss my first day of training?!? Never!" the large brute smiled to his son "that's better. You better hurry up though your sisters are already waiting for you"
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Sat Jan 14, 2012 6:08 pm

wooooo anymore in Chapter 1?
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:11 pm

Yup! I just got lazy and posted only a little of the chapter XD
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PostSubject: Re: For as long as the wind blows we will be.. (storm's story)   Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:12 pm

Lol kk Stormo xD
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