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 NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P

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PostSubject: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:20 am

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I started righting this 'cause I got bored. It needs a name and really... the story line isn't really going anywhere... I'm still trying to think what it should be about. XD for now, it shall be... NAMELESS!

Toby sat at the rotting desk in the back of the room. Mr Lawsen walked in with the daily telegraph newspaper under his sweaty arm. Whispers came from all corners of the class room. Laura walked over to the desk next to Toby's and sat down, feet up on the desk, arms on the back of the chairs, as she rocked on her own chair. Mr Lawsen stood in front of the class and addressed it as usual.
"Good morning class." He would say, and the class would always reply with the simple, 'good morning.' Though, Toby was new to this class and did not say a single word when the class did.
Mr Lawsen coughed and Toby swore he sore his lungs jump out if his mouth as he did. He shook away that thought and pulled out his english and math books. Just as he went to grab a pencil, a sudden pain ran up through his finger. He yelled out in pain and grasped at his hand.
"Oh, sorry sweetie. Mr L wants our tables to be set in groups you know." Laura said. Her soft british accent calmed Toby, unsure how that did though, he smiled and said, hold out his left hand, "I'm Toby." Laura exchanged the hand shake for a smile instead and turned back to her desk.
Toby's hand went cold as he had left it there for someone to shake it. He placed it down on the table and looked at his right hand. Red marks swelled into the tips of his index, middle and ring finger. He covered his hand with his other then released it.
"Toby." Mr Lawsen said. Toby immediately looked up from his desk.
"Ahh, Toby. New student." Mr Lawsen said, as he polished his glasses, "Why don't you come up here and tell us about yourself?"
Toby went to shake his head, but something was holding him back from doing that. He took in a breath and stood up from his chair and then proceeded to the front of the classroom.


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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:15 pm

Nice Zero xD
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:03 pm

Well if you do make Toby a super hero, Nameless might actually be a fitting title. I like it, sounds mysterious, could be anything kinda name. And it would fit if you make him a superhero but no one gives him a name, therefore the hero is nameless xD
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:42 pm

XD lol angel...
Zero, your creeping me out... why would a unicorn wear Micky's purple jeans? they have his germs on them. XD

lol, my uncle says choka block to much...
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Jan 19, 2012 8:11 pm

oopsy my bad...



it was a rainbow mained NINJA unicorn WITH RAINBOW WINGS... >P
& 'coooos jeany, the ninja unicorn will wear them to start dancing to 'party anthem' & to shuffle epically with skills while making cyrus suffer as his skinnys stretch out since ze uni be a bit fat >D

& angs got a point,-ish wondering if it will be a supehero one-
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Jan 19, 2012 8:53 pm

I like the name nameless xD it's makes you think before you start reading xD
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:28 am

ya it does
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:09 pm

ok, you guys are just a little creepy now... eh, I'll continue my story anyways.

Mr Lawsen placed a hand on Toby's shoulder, "Well, why don't you start by saying where you came from?"
Toby looked around the class room and took a deep breath, "Well, I came from New Zealand and um, my Dad is in the army."
The class, which was hardly paying attention before, looked up as soon as he said army. Mr Lawsen's eyes widened aswell, "So your dad does what in the army?"
Toby looked at Mr Lawsen, who happened to be nearly the same height as him, then looked at the class that now seemed to be paying attention. All except Murry, who is known as the class hotty. Toby proceeded telling the class about his dad, "He looks for mines." He said, then the class suddenly lost interest in Toby when they found out his dad just looks for mines. It is a pretty boring job... except for when you find a mine or something lands on one and the whole place blows up. Toby had to think of something else to make the class interested. He thought of other spots in the army that you can take up.

continue... soon...
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:19 pm

ooohhh xD am liking where this is heading xD kinda reminds me of how Stormbraker starts
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:29 pm

rrrright, and i know what stormbreaker is... -refreshes memory- erm, i'll be right back -goes to google-
Yup, totally. 0.0
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Mon Jan 30, 2012 2:14 am

Cool, i guess
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:07 am

hahaha, so u think its kinda lame hey? XD he gonna be mad! XD
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:28 am

Oh god Ghuna went there xD
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Feb 02, 2012 7:27 am

Ghuna wrote:
Cool, i guess


Thinks: Totally agree
Says: Great job XD

No JK, it's good Smile
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Thu Feb 02, 2012 9:56 am

It's good, really
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PostSubject: Re: NAMELESS By Cyrus... Need help with it. :P   Tue Feb 28, 2012 10:36 pm

=.=

my brain is being stupid... hmmm, shall think of more to say...

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